I'm actually having to gut the entire story and start from scratch to prevent a problem with a former friend saying crap about character development. I'm not sure how much I can handle having to gut the bear bones of the story and remove a character that was fundamental to the story.
I'm now redoing character development and redoing all characters so we can still have a story.
Characters who are staying
Dreselia
Kel
Belsom
Meg
These are staying intact because there is nothing wrong with them, the fundamental problem is Belinda, her story line and entire part of the plot which revolved around her is now being rehashed out.
I'm kind of sad because that means a new name and new identity altogether. I was a huge fan of her development and possible abilities to come, but after reading and re-editing it, I'm basically forced to take down the chapters and redo them
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